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Ah yes, Zorlock the Puffy Boi, most fearsome.

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Hey, found a typo. "horde all your magic for yourself?" Should be "hoard".

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oooh this is so cool and the. the what do you call that. the music. its. i love it and the amount of detail you can put into your character is. i love it so much. also. CHOMPSKY THE HELLHOUND SQUIRREL!!! oh I love this so much. tommy. tommy no. also DND LET'S GO NAT 20S

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Damn you, Tommy.

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Lmao I love this already, I can't wait to explore Tommy and Zorlok relationship.

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This is God tier omg

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First of all tommy, its the most tactical and reliable piece of wear that i will always use, im not gonna change it, ever. it even has different modes for the damned's sake! ITS CROCS, THE BEST CHOICE OF FOOTWEAR TOMMY, YOU WOULDNT GET IT.

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I-

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*SPOILER WARNING*





BRO I was thinking I was playing as Tommy but I'm really playing as ZORLOK?? That was a crazy twist I didn't expect.

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Isnt it- isnt it in the description?

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YUP I just didn't read the description! I always forget to!

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Ohhhh, this looks so promising!
Though trying save gives me an error message.

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:)

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Got a demonic Goat named Pickles, 10000/10.  😭

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I named my hellhound, "Boy". Someone is more creative than me 😂

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I’ve seen this game around when scrolling through for IFs but never had a chance to play it and now i regret not playing sooner cus the aesthetics and the writing is simply immaculate 

I love the amount of detail in demon customization, especially in aesthetics, I cant wait to play as two different Zorloks with the exact opposite fashion taste (Goth and sweet pastel)

I can’t bring myself to be a complete asshole to tommy so he’s just gunna have two overprotective parents on both playthroughs

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I have only had Tommy for 20 minutes, but if anything happened to him my Zorlok and I would kill everyone in this room and then ourselves.

Can't wait to see more!!

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The customization is enough to make me cry it's absolutely wonderful and I was really captivated in the story thus far! I can't wait to figure out why Tommy's friend has been acting that way. Overall I loved how cocky the demon was when being introduced and how now it's a whole clean slate because of Tommy 😭

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I love the amount of customization and descriptions you put in this, hoping for more updates in the future! ^^

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This ended too soon. I was planning on playing this for hours lol.. it seems really good so far despite it not being much. I especially loved the character customisation. We can choose make-up, to dress hot/sexy or cute.. have piercings.. you did very well on character creation, even our pet is customizable but the story ended right after lol.

I'll come back from time to time to check on this. good luck!

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Oh my fricking gosh the hilarity

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I know that you just got back, but i just wanted to report a bug ;v; 

theres no next button or anything

Hmm, I think that the page automatically saved as I was making changes to it so the version that was live was an old browser file. I just checked and didn't notice this problem but please let me know if the problem persists.

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Question. Why doesnt the choices go past where you have to tell harlow the truth about why tommy came there like it did before?

the same thing is happening to me right now, it wasn't doing that the first time that i played zorlok though

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I think that itch.io saved while I was making changes to this page and accidentally set an old draft as the active game file. Please let me know if the problem persists though.

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i think it's fixed, everything is working again, ty :)

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Awesome! Thank you! :)

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Take your time going to wait as long as I can

Thank you <3 Unfortunately, it'll be a little while longer for chapter 1 (more info here)

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I understand if you have your personal reasons for not updating/releasing chapter 1 yet, but a small update about what is going on would really put all of our minds at ease im sure. ‘v’ you don’t have to go into detail, of course, but it’d be nice to at least know if this is an abandoned project case or you just need more time. :)) ♥️

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Thank you and sorry for the lack of response. I go into some detail here but I've been off media for the past week and a half completing finals and midterms for several of my summer courses. Sorry that I'm just getting to answering this now. This project isn't abandoned, I just haven't had as much time as I'd like to work on it so the next chapter has been delayed.

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Holy heck this is really cool! The Zorlok I made was like deceptively average but if given the option I want them to be a menace to society. This was fun, can't wait to see what happens next

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the hellhound brought me joy

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OBSESSED with this game !!!!! the customization was super fun !!!!!! (and the fact that the customization actually Affects thing is so cool, i made my demon a punk guy and tommy was like "little conspicuous dont you think" which i thought was funny asdklasjf) but the writing is super funny, esp the interactions between the demon and tommy, and this whole game is super super charming !!!! so excited to see more !!!!

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I came for a short IF experience and stayed for the most competent dress-up section I have ever found. I will be returning and yes it will be purely to play dress-up with a demon-thingy each time

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this was amazing and i'm so excited for the next release. the customization (and i'm not lying when i say that i've never played an IF with so much detail in the customization), music, characters and story so far are top tier. i'm really looking forward to see what you have planned for this!!

oh and side note, i especially love how trans friendly and diverse this was <3

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Yesss one of the IFs of all time tbh. The character customisation is so great and I can’t wait to read more of the story. Love all the options for customising your Z so much. It really encourages replaying the game. Well done Albie, amazing work 👏👏👏

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i named my golden retriever hell hound lightsniffer because why tf  not

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This is great... like, really really great. I think I'm in love.

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YOOO THAT WAS SO GOOD I LOVE IT SO MUCH

the music, the writing, the story, the character customization- you're awesome i love you.

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Ok that was a great intro to the story! Definitely looking forward to seeing more =)

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Before I've even finished yet, I really love that you've included the option for text descriptions of music. I'm sure it was intended for people who are deaf or hard of hearing, and I'm not either of those, but it helps me a lot too. Part of my autism is sound sensitivity, so I almost always play games with the volume at zero. With the text descriptions I can get nearly the full experience without needing to turn on sound. 

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i cannot begin to describe the power i feel putting zorlok in a sexy outfit and heelys

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I'm liking this so far, especially the in-depth character creation. The only thing I'm not a fan of is how strongly it dictates the tone of our demon (seeing as I envisioned my demon as much more stoic/cold in nature). But hopefully we'll be able to dictate that a lot more when we take control of our demon.
Other than that, great!

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Hi! Thank you and yes, that will change. The original demon had their own personality but Zorlok's personality is up to the player. Once you begin playing as Z in chapter 1 you will be able to choose how your character behaves and acts (but the demon is essentially a different character so the player can't dictate how they behave in the prologue).

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Character creation certainly is extensive and it is an interesting thing you are making too. Now I am hoping that there is actual progress in this project.

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dear author <3 I NEED MORE

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Great so far! I love how detailed the character creation is, can't wait to read more!

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Hello! I don't know if it's just me or not but when I try to click continue it glitches and the thing on the bottom goes up so I can't press it. (the thing that says, "Phone" and "Notebook" or whatever. Hope this gets fixed.

Hi, sorry for the delayed reply. With the update that just went live this issue should be fixed. Please let me know if you continue to have the footer menu block the continue button. Thanks!

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Seeing all the hype in my feed I had to try this demo and while it is short in a way it’s definitely left a great impression! I was a little confused at the start with making choices for Tommy given I thought we’d exclusively play as Zorlok, but I actually like the feature! It really helps the feel of shaping the story as well as develop a character we’re suppose to have such a big impact on! I also really appreciated the explanation of touch adverse as what that would entail game wise! I’ve always been a mix of not liking certain touch at certain times or by people I don’t know well enough but also been really affectionate with those closest to me so touch averse options often do have me confused where myself or a character I have would fall under so this is a really helpful explanation!!! The suggestions for titles as well as other options is really helpful as well! The atmosphere and really in depth character customization really sold me as well! Especially the little ways Tommy reacts to your appearance, like even just the dog tags.

Overall 20/10 very excited to see where this all goes!!!

Edit: Not sure how to leave an actual rating but would for sure be giving you the five stars you deserve if I did. I also keep editing because there are so many nice features I want to mention that I keep remembering. And I’ve only scratched the surface so far. 

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I love this! It's really funny to go back and try different clothings option just to see Tommy's reaction. I've been waiting for this for a while and you clearly does not disappoint. I'm excited to see how this will go!!

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